Tuesday, April 10, 2007

comments i posted

James comment-
your paper is a good start, but i feel that it needs a little more evidence to make it more concrete.

Joshua comment-
its a good start. you may want to add some qoutes about ethnics. and add a little evidence from the books. you could also have a little mini experiment with a cashier, try seeing if they actually says the same thing word for word to all of you.

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